dx5231's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Duairt Eittle Episode 19]

Poorly animated.

Well, this is what I would expect from someone making his first flash. But apparently, you've been doing this for like three years or more.

The first thing you notice on the flash is how badly drawn and animated this is. The drawings are too plain. No real shading, shapes are terribly drawn, etc. Then, the animation. The characters just stand still, even while walking, using their hands to fight. By the way, the fighting scene was just ridiculous. The animation is not smooth, and who fights without even moving their hands and legs? And the colors used on the flash. Oh god they were awful. Terrible tones. You should look for smoother colors, not "hard" colors like that, as you never see such colors anywhere in the world.

Now, about that annoying "voice" I hear when the characters speak. Why even making a really annoying high pitched voice saying nothing at all? You should remove it. Instead, get some real voice acting. I've seen your voice acting work, and you should definitely not do it yourself.

Apart from the animation, the story is also terrible. Really. I see the genre is "Comedy - Original", but I didn't see any comedy in that flash, and it's probably not that original.

About you not taking criticism: this is newgrounds, you'll eventually take criticism (with such flashes, more like all the time. Oh, and criticism not always means bad comments on the work, there can also be good criticism, you should probably get to know your language a little bit more). Well, even outside newgrounds, you'd take criticism, work can never be perfect. Do you seriously only expect to get 10's and 5's out of this work? I don't think so. I'm not voting because I don't like your attitude, I'm voting on the quality of the flash. Maybe the fact that you've never been able to take criticism is why your animation hasn't improved for all the time you've been to newgrounds posting your flashes. If you don't like taking criticism, you should seek for another website, not newgrounds. This is not the place for you.

Do you really think your work is great? Take a second and try watching other flashes, some with real effort put into them, and you'll see you need to improve, and that your flash isn't the best on earth. So maybe you will start trying to actually put some effort on your flashes, try to make yourself better. But no, you're already too cool to do that.

If you do actually respond to this with a "Fuck You" or "Lol I don't take criticism", without even reading a little bit of this review and making a proper response, it really shows how immature you are.

VioletVulpine responds:

I love how you ONLY TALK ABOUT THE BAD. That's not a review, dipshite.

[Brazilians are Sick]

Ok.

We eventually come up with weird shit, yes. But so as other countries. Take Asian countries for example. Also, I wonder how you came across that video. And you should have learned already that every single school take stuff WAY too seriously.

Now, talking about the animation
It is really short. I can see you did not put enough effort on it. But the voice acting is actually pretty good. The audio quality is great. If you made this flash longer, it would be better.

Psi43 responds:

Haha, thanks. I am actually German so i know all about those sick fetish stereotypes. I could have put more effort into the animation or made it longer, but for comedic purposes i did it like that. Thanks a lot though!

[Ninja Fight!]

Bad quality.

Really bad quality. The drawings are ok, but the flash makes no sense. "OH HAI LETS FITE". There is no sound at all. Not even a simple background music that suits the flash. You should add more colors, a preloader, and a "replay" button at the end, so the flash doesn't loop.
You should work more on this. If even you, the author, said it is crappy, then why did you even submit it? This is just an animated sketch. People don't like unfinished stuff.
Honest review, not influenced by any shitty beef I have with you.

GreatPowerfulTrixie responds:

Well, you are right, thank you for the hints!

[We Hate Modern Warfare 2]

Lmao.

That overlord joke was so funny, I also wonder how those people know all that shit that's going on. And I found Ghost moving across the screen shaking his arms funny.
Good job, I really liked it.

MoozipanCheese responds:

Well, I'm glad you really liked it.

[The Clown Downstairs]

First attempt at a flash animation?

Kinda hard to believe, it looks so great, while most of the "first animations" I have seen so far look so crappy.
Great art, great animation. If this is your first, then probably your next ones are going to be epic.

JohnDavidHeptinstall responds:

Thankyou very much!

[Scout Goes To The Medic]

lmfao

I love the animation. It's awesome. The voice acting is awesome as well. Great job!

professor-fate responds:

Lol well, the voice acting is taken from the game. But thanks a lot. XD

[MZM 69 2]

Pretty awesome!

Haha, this is some funny shit man. The parts where the fat guy spins is fucking hilarious. I really enjoyed this.
Great job, keep it up.

nggangsterpimp responds:

Thanks! I made about 60% of this in just 3 days because i was almost out of time.

[Slyness]

cool

The only bad thing here is that the movie is too short. Maybe if you made it longer, I'd give you a higher score.
The graphics are great. Well, not much to say here, this is too short.

LeoMC responds:

is a short for Nickelodeon animation festival 2009, and lasts 15 seconds because it was the slogan of the festival, if he wins there will be a 2-minute animation with these characters

thanks for your comment

[Altamat3 Madn3zz Pwnadg3!]

Holy shit

This is some awesome stuff.

kanamomashouse responds:

Yes. It tis a visual masterpiece.

[Madness 5.5 Preview 2]

hey

Dis b some cool shit homie
Cant wait to c dis cummin

kanamomashouse responds:

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